Timeline

As a group we decided it was important for us to make a timeline. Although this is kind of like the storyboard it makes it clear to us about the times it takes for each shot and also helps us to make the script.  It helps us with the script as we see what the most important parts are and what points it is important for us to let the audience know a little bit more and what parts the two men would say something in real life as it puts us in the position of 'what would they say at this point?' Also it helped me to understand that these two men are obviously friends as they are collegues so they would talk like any male would, we just need to understand their relationship and this needs to be apparent in the dialogue. The time line helped us understand that we need to show the friendship, and we could maybe do this by showing one of the men as being quite funny and the other quite serious, or something like that.